Taking into consideration my committee's feedback, I've had to really concentrate on articulating my argument to demonstrate how all my research has culminated into the paper as it now stands. I've realized that what I really need to focus on is connecting certain elements that up till now I've allowed to go on assumed. Also, I really need to make sure that the chapters don't appear too distinct-they should and do build on one another, and I just need to make that as clear as possible to the reader. I'm rewriting an introduction that I think will "frame" the argument better and show how all of these pieces are functioning together and not separately.
Also, I want to make the whole project "snazzier." Thinking about how that can be done without being distracting to the academic focus of the project.
Also, I want to make the whole project "snazzier." Thinking about how that can be done without being distracting to the academic focus of the project.